Difference between revisions of "Lodi"

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 ==Inhabitants==
-There are many nameless faces in the Lodi crowd such as the gnome men, women, children, deputies, guards, iguanas, sheep, and wildcats, but there are many in Lodi who have made a name for themselves.
+There are many nameless folk in the Lodi crowd such as the gnome men, women, children, deputies, and guards, but there are some who have made a name for themselves.
 *[[Arane]], the wife of Shais
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 *[[Verld]], fisherman of Lodi
-These faces can be found in the village of [[Gorshire]] which is located in the southern area of Lodi.
+The following denizens can be found in the village of [[Gorshire]], located in the southern area of Lodi.
 *[[Beck]], the Chief Constable
 *[[Bencur]], the innkeeper