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-Dirty, ugly, and with a perpetual stench emanating from him, '''Bertram''' the sewer worker remains confined to the [[sewers]] of [[Mhaldor]] where he is seldom seen by any, save adventurers who venture into the filthy depths.
+Dirty, ugly, and emanating a perpetual stench, '''Bertram, the sewer worker''', remains confined to the [[sewers]] of [[Mhaldor]], where he is seldom seen by any, save for the intrepid - some say insane - [[adventurers]] who venture into the filthy depths.
-There is a dish named after him in the [[Worm and Grub]], inspired by his taste for less conventional cuisine.
+There is a dish named after him in the [[Worm and Grub]]; it was inspired by his taste for less conventional cuisine.
 [[category:Mhaldor Denizens]]