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Pandemonium is not in the Eileithyian Tree anymore, WC (she did not go "awry"), UK spelling, redundant links, grammar, de-hyphenation, wordiness

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 [[Eris]] (mother)
-[[Pandemonium]] (brother)|allies=see ''Relatives''|enemies=[[Slith]]|temples=The [[Temple of Pandora]] in the [[Dakhota Hills]]}}
+[[Pandemonium]] (brother)|allies=see ''Relatives''|enemies=[[Slith]]|temples=[[Temple of Pandora]], in the [[Dakhota Hills]]}}
-'''Pandora, Goddess of Mischief''', is the daughter of [[Eris]], Goddess of Chaos and [[Aegis]], God of War. Her twin brother, [[Pandemonium]], sleeps cradled within the [[Eileithyian Tree]] where He is healed of the wounds He received during the [[War of the Divine Child]].
+'''Pandora, Goddess of Mischief''', is the daughter of Eris and Aegis, the Gods of [[Chaos]] and War, respectively. Her twin brother is Pandemonium, the God of Strife.
-Once, Pandora took the [[Caduceus of Castigation]], a precious artefact belonging to [[Sarapis]], while He was away. She ran awry, turning the frail mortals who amused her into maggots, cripples, and mutes. Her over-use of the artefact caused it to fuse itself into Her hand, making it necessary for Sarapis to amputate Her hand at the wrist upon His return.
+Once, Pandora took the [[Caduceus of Castigation]], a precious artefact belonging to [[Sarapis]], while the Logos was away. She then proceeded to wreak havoc across the lands, turning various of the mortals She found amusingly frail into maggots, cripples, and mutes. Her overuse of the artefact caused it to fuse to Her hand, making it necessary for Sarapis to amputate it from Her wrist upon His return.
-Both angry and amused by Pandora's activities, Sarapis branded Pandora with the title "Goddess of Mischief" so that mortals would know their peril when She was near. Those who follow the fun-loving [[gods|goddess]] worship at the [[Temple of Pandora]].
+Both angered and amused by Pandora's escapades, Sarapis branded Pandora with the title "Goddess of Mischief" so that mortals would know their peril when She was near. Those who follow this fun-loving Goddess worship Her at the Temple of Pandora.
-Her symbol is a silver hand, modeled after the one constructed for Her by Lord [[Phaestus]].
+Her [[:Category:Divine Symbols|symbol]] is a silver hand, modelled after the one constructed for Her by Lord [[Phaestus]] to replace Her amputated appendage.
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