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-There many [[:Category:Afflictions|afflictions]] that may befall adventurers in Achaea. Each is unique in its effects. While most are detrimental some may actually be considered advantageous, under certain circumstances.
+There are many [[:Category:Afflictions|afflictions]] that may befall [[adventurers]] in Achaea, each one unique in its effects. While most are detrimental, some may actually be considered advantageous under certain circumstances. Such afflictions are often considered [[defences]], such as [[deafness]] and [[blindness]].
-Afflictions include any of the altered states of being brought on by [[venoms]], [[curses]], psychic manipulation, and various other [[abilities]] used by combatants and creatures. The [[Ring of Pestilence]] is an enchantment that will target its victim with a random affliction.
+Afflictions include any of the altered states of mind and body brought on by [[venoms]], [[curses]], psychic manipulation, and various other [[abilities]] used by combatants and [[:Category:Creatures|creatures]]. The [[ring of pestilence]] is an [[enchantment]] that will target its victim with a random affliction.
-As with all things in nature, every ailment has a corresponding cure, whether it be an [[:Category: Herbs|herb]], [[:Category: Salves|salve]], or [[:Category: Elixirs|elixir]]. The powerful [[Tree Tattoo|Tree of Life tattoo]] can also cure almost all afflictions, along with the priestly skill of [[Healing]]. The [[Gem of Negation]] and [[Necklace of Purity]] are both enchantments that cure afflictions.
+As is natural, every ailment has a corresponding [[:Category:Pharmaceuticals|cure]], whether it be an [[:Category:Herbs|herb]], [[:Category: Salves|salve]], or [[:Category: Elixirs|elixir]]. The powerful [[Tree Tattoo|Tree of Life tattoo]] can also cure almost all afflictions, as can the [[Priest]] [[:Category:Skills|skill]] of [[Healing]]. The [[gem of negation]] and the [[necklace of purity]] are both enchantments that also cure afflictions.
-Some afflictions may also be considered [[defence]]s, such as [[deafness]] and [[blindness]].
+Some afflictions may also be considered [[defences]]s, such as [[deafness]] and [[blindness]].
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 [[Category:Biology]]