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-'''Blu's Den of Delights''' is a gift shop in the [[city]] of [[Cyrene]]. [[Fredericia]] tends the shop, which sells local gifts unique to the city.
+'''[[Blu|Blu's]] Den of Delights''' is a gift [[Shops|shop]] in the [[city]] of [[Cyrene]]. [[Fredericia]] tends the shop, which sells local gifts unique to the city.
 ==Wares==
 ''Full descriptions of items can be seen by visiting the shop in Cyrene.''
-'''Containers:'''
+'''[[:Category:Containers|Containers]]:'''
-;Bejewelled Cyrenian Scabbard - 750gp : Decorated to reflect the warmth of the citizens of Cyrene and the richness bestowed by [[Prospero]] during his tenure as city Patron.
+;Bejewelled Cyrenian scabbard - 750gp : Decorated to reflect the warmth of the citizens of Cyrene and the richness bestowed by [[Prospero]] during his tenure as city [[Patron]].
-;Pouch of Shimmering Blue Silk - 2500gp : Crafted from silk in bright blues and greens like those found in [[Lake Muurn]] with a lighthouse formed on the fabric with brown and gray thread.
+;Pouch of shimmering blue silk - 2500gp : Crafted from silk in bright blues and greens like those found in [[Lake Muurn]], with a lighthouse formed on the fabric with brown and gray thread.
-;Bejeweled Blue Leather Scabbard - 650gp : Made from hardened leather dyed blue with a ring of sapphires encircling a patch stitched into the material depicting a scene from Centre Crossing.
+;Bejeweled blue leather scabbard - 650gp : Made from hardened leather dyed blue, with a ring of sapphires encircling a patch stitched into the material depicting a scene from Centre Crossing.
-;Snow White Embroidered Gift Bag - 100gp : Embroidered on one side is an image of a blue dragon standing against a range of snow covered mountains.
+;Snow white embroidered gift bag - 100gp : Embroidered on one side is an image of a blue [[:Category:Lesser Dragons|dragon]] standing against a range of snow covered [[:Category:Mountains|mountains]].
-;Decorated Crystal Vase - 3725gp : Created from crystal shards this vase is elegant and meant to hold a single flower.
+;Decorated crystal vase - 3725gp : Created from crystal shards, this vase is elegant and meant to hold a single flower.
-;Elaborate Jewellery Box - 4000gp : Details carved into the lid depict a marine shore and a waterfall. Inside, the box is covered in dark red velvet and divided into several smaller compartments for sorting.
+;Elaborate [[jewellery]] box - 4000gp : Details carved into the lid depict a marine shore and a waterfall. Inside, the box is laced with dark red velvet and divided into several smaller compartments for sorting.
-'''Toys:'''
+'''[[Toys]]:'''
-;Adorable, Stuffed Bunny - 400gp : Realistic snow white fur and big, black eyes over a cute, button nose make it perfect for cuddling.
+;Adorable, stuffed bunny - 400gp : Realistic snow white fur and big, black eyes over a cute button nose make this perfect for cuddling.
-;[[Balaia]] Plush - 2000gp : Velvet-like cotton similar in appearance to the fur of its namesake makes this plush toy perfect for snuggling, and doubles as a pillow.
+;[[Balaia]] plush - 2000gp : Velvet-like cotton similar in appearance to the fur of its namesake makes this plush toy perfect for snuggling; it even doubles as a pillow!
-;Stuffed Wolf - 700gp : A realistic toy resembling Luka, a loyal of the [[Arcanists]]' house.
+;Stuffed wolf - 700gp : A realistic toy resembling Luka, a loyal of the [[Arcanists]] [[:Category:Houses|House]].
-'''Decorative:'''
+'''Decorations:'''
-;Wooden Falcon Statuette - 1500gp : Carved from a piece of wood until smooth now carved into the graceful form of a perched falcon.
+;Wooden [[falcons|falcon]] statuette - 1500gp : Carved from a smooth piece of wood into the graceful form of a perched falcon.
-;Sapphire Model of [[Blu]] - 5000gp : A model of the city's guardian carved from a single piece of sapphire.
+;Sapphire model of Blu - 5000gp : A model of the city's [[:Category:City Guardians|guardian]] carved from a single piece of sapphire.
-;Cyrenian Snowglobe - 2000gp : The city of the Vashnars caught in minute detail in a glass globe. When shaken, "snow" inside the globe appears to fall over the city.
+;Cyrenian snowglobe - 2000gp : The city of the [[Vashnars]] caught in minute detail in a glass globe. When shaken, "snow" inside the globe appears to fall over the city.
-;Snowflake Cloak Clasp - 1500gp : Made from the finest silver and fashioned to resemble a snowflake, this clasp makes a perfect gift or souvenir.
+;Snowflake cloak clasp - 1500gp : Made from the finest silver and fashioned to resemble a snowflake, this clasp makes a perfect gift or souvenir.
-;Magnificent Falconry Glove - 500gp : Polished black leather stitched with golden thread with a noble phrased stitched over the wrist in silver embroidery.
+;Magnificent falconry glove - 500gp : Polished black leather stitched with golden thread and a noble phrase embroidered over the wrist in silver.
 '''Edible:'''
-;Heart-Shaped Box of Chocolates - 300gp : This elegant box has a scalloped edge with a hand-painted snowdrop flower on the lid. Inside, chocolates are arranged in gold foil.
+;Heart-shaped box of chocolates - 300gp : This elegant box has a scalloped edge with a hand-painted snowdrop [[flower]] on the lid. Inside, chocolates are arranged in gold foil.
 [[Category:Denizen Shops]]