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-{{God_infobox|godname=Sartan, the Malevolent|realm=Evil|temples=[[Mhaldor]]|enemies=[[Pentharian]], [[Tarah]], [[Lorielan]], and [[Mithraea]]|ordername=Sartai|symbols=a black hand}}
+{{God_infobox|godname=Sartan, the Malevolent|realm=Evil|temples=Mhaldor|enemies=[[Pentharian]], [[Tarah]], [[Lorielan]], and [[Mithraea]]|ordername=Sartai|symbols=a black hand}}
-At the coming of the [[Morning Star]], two [[:Category:Gods|Gods]] were created: [[Apollyon]] and [[Aurora]]. The [[Elder God]] [[Shaitan]] attacked and absorbed the essence of [[Apollyon]], and afterwards declared Himself a new God: '''Sartan, God of [[Evil]]'''.
+At the coming of the [[Morning Star]], two [[:Category:Gods|Gods]] were created: [[Apollyon]] and [[Aurora]]. The [[Elder God]] [[Shaitan]] attacked and absorbed the [[Divine essence]] of [[Apollyon]], declaring Himself born anew as '''Sartan, God of [[Evil]]'''.
-Circa 326 AF Sartan kidnapped the child-god [[Pandemonium]], offspring of [[Eris|Eris, Goddess of Chaos]] and [[Aegis|Aegis, God of War]], and bound him in a fissure beneath [[Mhaldor]], an act which began the [[War of the Divine Child]].
+Circa 326 AF, Sartan kidnapped the child-God [[Pandemonium]], son of [[Eris]], Goddess of [[Chaos]], and [[Aegis]], God of War. Sartan then bound Him in the [[fissure]] beneath [[Mhaldor]], an act that catalyzed the [[War of the Divine Child]].
-Nearly two centuries later, with the assistance of [[Keresis]], Goddess of Vengeance, Sartan once again split His essence into the original two Gods.
+Decades later, in [[Scarlatan]] of 396 AF, with the assistance of [[Keresis]], Goddess of Vengeance, Sartan split His essence back into those of the original two Gods, Shaitan and Apollyon, to better oversee the spread of Evil.
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