Talk:Isbri

During a ritual in Demeter's name, this gliding, whistling fairie gave all her strength until she first glowed as a white sphere encompassed her and then diminished, her energies channeling through an altar.

This is the basic sentence in each of the fairie pages, and I can't understand it. Is it just not clicking for me or is that really awkward structure? Corvax 04:17, 25 June 2007 (GMT)

Drat. Each one gave a different thing, strength, breath, etc. I'll change the rest. In the ritual, they gave all their (trait) and were then encompassed by a (colour) globe before diminishing into nothing. Madelyne 18:06, 25 June 2007 (GMT)