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*Use appropriate materials. You can't make a shirt out of living skin or pure gold. | *Use appropriate materials. You can't make a shirt out of living skin or pure gold. | ||
*Metal that may not be used is mithril, orichalcum, and bloodsteel. | *Metal that may not be used is mithril, orichalcum, and bloodsteel. | ||
*Subjective statements and/or marketing materials: be careful with this. Examples of things to not do: "This wedding dress is perfect and is perfectly suited for any chapel." "The earrings are so flashy they are a great conversation starter." "No greater declaration of love could be made by any jewel than by this diamond ring..." "This hat with fake bunny ears is the most adorable thing ever." | |||
*Hyphens. Often overused, and used incorrectly! General guidelines: Yes in words, e.g. passer-by. No as a replacement for a comma e.g. "A gold rose blossoms on the face of the ring - shining lustrously in any available light" | |||
===Cooking Specific=== | ===Cooking Specific=== |