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-The '''Dreamspear''' is a tall, narrow spire of dark granite in the northern [[Saoghal Mountains]]. Though not as high as many of the surrounding peaks, its prominence and stark relief cause it to stand out against the surrounding peaks.
+The '''Dreamspear''' is a tall, narrow spire of dark granite in the northern [[Saoghal Mountains]]. Though not as high as many of its neighbours, its prominence and stark relief cause it to stand out against the surrounding peaks.
 As she slumbered in the halls of [[Valnurana]]'s temple, the prophet and seer [[Apollonia]] dreamt of a great spear that struck the earth at her feet, somewhere far to the north. She discovered the peak after an arduous pilgrimage, aided by the devout of the goddess Valnurana, and decided to dwell in a small cave at the peak as a testament to the majesty of dreams.
 [[Category:Religious Sites]][[Category:Mountains]]