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several issues that still need to be addressed
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::::I'm not sure I understand the problem. The Dragoncurse article needs to be deleted because it is no longer an independent racial ability and now exists in a skill's list. Overharvesting is a concept that played a major role in centuries of Achaea's history - stick all of it in the past tense and add an IC rationale for why this is no longer the case. [[User:Asara|Asara]] 00:49, 24 March 2008 (GMT) | ::::I'm not sure I understand the problem. The Dragoncurse article needs to be deleted because it is no longer an independent racial ability and now exists in a skill's list. Overharvesting is a concept that played a major role in centuries of Achaea's history - stick all of it in the past tense and add an IC rationale for why this is no longer the case. [[User:Asara|Asara]] 00:49, 24 March 2008 (GMT) | ||
Well, I ended up doing this myself, so we're all set for this article. However, other related articles will still need updating. [[User:Asara|Asara]] 23:20, 30 April 2008 (GMT) | Well, I ended up doing this myself, so we're all set for this article. However, other related articles will still need updating. [[User:Asara|Asara]] 23:20, 30 April 2008 (GMT) | ||
Why isn't the first sentence in past tense? The second sentence is grammatically incorrect. "harvesters found that they could no longer strip a room's plants entirely" is not a true statement (for more reasons than one, given the multiple definitions of "strip"), and "rooms" is an OOC concept. This article also doesn't mention when the rules of overharvesting were implemented, so to call it "one of the most longest-standing Achaean ordinances" (which is, incidentally, very awkward wording) makes little sense when only the end date is provided. --[[User:Krypton|Krypton]] 01:18, 1 May 2008 (GMT) | |||