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This article reads like an ad. Should a more neutral tone be adopted? | This article reads like an ad. Should a more neutral tone be adopted? | ||
[[User:Haydre|Haydre]] 18:14, 16 December 2006 (GMT) | [[User:Haydre|Haydre]] 18:14, 16 December 2006 (GMT) | ||
Yeah. It does sound like something from a cheesey holiday brochure. Could someone re-work it, please? --[[User:Tasshya|Tasshya]] 00:25, 17 December 2006 (GMT) | |||