Difference between revisions of "Talk:Erisian Pyramid"

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This article reads like an ad. Should a more neutral tone be adopted?
This article reads like an ad. Should a more neutral tone be adopted?
[[User:Haydre|Haydre]] 18:14, 16 December 2006 (GMT)
[[User:Haydre|Haydre]] 18:14, 16 December 2006 (GMT)
Yeah. It does sound like something from a cheesey holiday brochure. Could someone re-work it, please? --[[User:Tasshya|Tasshya]] 00:25, 17 December 2006 (GMT)

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