Difference between revisions of "Alcohol"

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-'''Alcohol''' is one of the drugs of Achaea, a middleground between [[cactus weed]] and [[gleam]] in terms of effects on the body. The first alcohol upon the face of Achaea was created by Lady [[Demeter]] in the form of mead after using the [[Thyrsus]] to discover the secrets of honey. Alcohol and drunkenness, with all the consequenses of drinking, were introduced in the year 196 AF.
+'''Alcohol''' is one of several Achaean [[drugs]], taking middle ground between [[cactus weed]] and [[gleam]] in terms of its effects on the body. Alcohol was first created by Lady [[Demeter]] in the form of mead, after She used the [[Thyrsus]] to uncover the secrets of honey. Alcohol, drunkenness and all other consequences of drinking were introduced in the year 196 AF.
 == Basic Alcohol ==
-At least a few of these types of alcohol can be found in every city, but few places will contain every type. The base types of alcohol in Achaea are as follows:
+At least a few types of alcohol can be found in every city, but few places will contain every type. The base types of alcohol in Achaea are as follows:
 *Ale
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 == Specialty Alcohol ==
-Every city has a unique tasting of beverages that one can enjoy or kill oneself by.
+Every city has its own unique array of liquors for adventurers to enjoy or kill themselves with.
 *[[Ashtan Drinks]]