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 ==Lodi==
-The valley of Lodi is located within the [[Putoran Hills]], west off of the [[Raphaelan Highway]]. The valley is home to a village of gnomes and a colony of sentient wildcats, a mining excavation, and others various beings. Like Minia, there are various quests one can complete, such as the bounty Constable [[Beck]] has placed on the [[wildcat]] menace, and the [[bat]] problem in the mines.
+The valley of Lodi lies within the [[Putoran Hills]], west off of the [[Raphaelan Highway]]. You can earn gold and experience by helping various denizens, such as killing wildcats for Constable [[Beck]] or exterminating [[bats]] from the mines.
-===Points of Interest===
 *'''The village of Gorshire'''
-:[[Gorshire]], a village of [[gnomes]], is situated in the southern portion of the [[Putoran Hills]], though generally still considered part of the land of Lodi. It is home to a small community of gnomes, enemies of the evolved wildcats in the fields to the north.
+:[[Gorshire]] is a quaint village situated in the southern portion of the [[Putoran Hills]] within Lodi. It is home to a community of [[gnomes]], the sworn enemies of the evolved wildcats who prey on livestock to the north.
 *'''The lair of the wildcats'''
-:Once upon a time, the inhabitants of this cave were simply wildcats. Due to evolution over the years, however, the wildcats have become sentient and sly, lead by their leader, [[Scylina]]. The Wildcat Queen and her kin are in a constant state of hostility with the rest of the valley Lodi, and Scylina herself will pay for the bodies of the gnomes. You may find wildcat lair in the northwestern part of Lodi.
+:Deep within the northwestern area of Lodi, [[Scylina]] rules over her fellow [[wildcats]]. The Wildcat Queen and her kin hold such deep hatred for the gnomes that she will pay for their corpses.
 *'''The Lodi mines'''
-:Run by the miner foreman, [[Dorven]], this mine is noticeably undermanned. Two absent-minded miners, [[Sleff]] and [[Kortine]], work within the bat-infested caverns, seeking help with their problems. Dorven will pay kindly for bat corpses for proof of a dwindling infestation. You can find the mines in central Lodi, northeast off the main intersection.
+:The miner foreman, [[Dorven]], oversees this undermanned mine and is always looking for adventures to help pick up the slack, whether it is eliminating pests from the mines or running shipments to his partner in [[Delos]].
 ==Mount Gheladan==