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-'''Averan''' is a sweet young girl with bright red locks, who resides in the village of [[Eleusis]] and is especially fond of blueberry tarts.
+'''A little girl named Averan''' resides in the village of [[Eleusis]]. With a head full of shiny, red locks, she is sweet and especially fond of [[blueberry]] tarts.
-She is the daughter of [[Miri|Miss Miri, the tea mistress]], and sister to [[Tiah|Tiah, of the Golden Hair]] and [[Lhaya|Lhaya, of the Raven Locks]].
+She is the daughter of Miss [[Miri]], the tea mistress, and the younger sister of [[Tiah]] and [[Lhaya]].
 [[Category:Eleusian Denizens]]