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-'''Melkor, the Savant''' was a follower of [[Agatheis]], and stayed within the antechamber of the Temple of the Elemental Lord for some years. A rather plain looking man, he is six feet in height with brown hair and lightly tanned skin. His figure was concealed by long robes the colour of midnight and he spends his free time reading.
+One of the last remaining Aldar, '''Melkor, the Savant''' was a chosen student of [[Agatheis]] and stayed within the antechamber of the Temple of the Elemental Lord for some years. He had personally oversaw and built the temple while his Lord was still serving His punishment. A rather plain-looking man, he is six feet in height with brown hair and lightly tanned skin. His figure was concealed by long robes the colour of midnight.
+For his crimes of assisting the Elemental Lord during the War of Humanity, [[Miramar]] stripped him of his inherent Aldar power, cursing him to retain his agelessness yet with the capacity to die as mortals do. This would cause him to become frail with time.
+Following the death of Agatheis, he entered the once-temple of the Elemental Lord and permanently shut the doors behind him. He has not been heard from since, nor is his status known.
 [[Category: Agathean Denizens]] [[category: Immortals]]