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-'''Runaway River''' flows through [[Bopalopia]] into '''Huggles Lake''', and is known to be quite difficult to navigate. This angry rapid roil in white frothy waves and the undertow of the river is wickedly strong as can be seen by the leaves and other detritus that is constantly sucked under and violently thrust upwards some yards away. One could find himself pulled under by the torrid current and resurface while gasping for air, in a different river room altogether.
+'''Runaway River''' of [[Bopalopia]] flows into '''Huggles Lake''' and is known its difficulty to navigate. The angry Runaway rapids roil into white, frothy waves, and the undertow of the river is wickedly strong so as to constantly suck leaves and other detritus under, violently thrusting it all back upward some yards away. [[Adventurers]] often find themselves pulled under by the torrid current, resurfacing in a different part of the river entirely as they gasp for air.
-Dangerous it may be this river is also famous for its quiet and peaceful [[Fishing|fishing]] location by adventurer anglers.
+As dangerous as the Runaway may be, it remains a popular [[fishing]] spot because of its quiet, peaceful riverbanks.
 [[Category:Rivers]]