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-'''Pandarus''', was a flashy pimp who early in the year 361AF publicly offered his wares to the city of [[Ashtan]]. Familiar with the concept of a doxy house, his presence did not cause alarm until he was found grotesquely murdered in Ashtan, his corpse swinging from a vine noose.
+'''Pandarus''' was a flashy pimp who, early in the year 361 AF, publicly offered his wares to the city of [[Ashtan]]. Familiar with the concept of a doxy house, his presence did not cause alarm until he was found grotesquely murdered in Ashtan, his corpse swinging from a vine noose.
+Killed by [[Ysven]], an alleged member of the [[Jaguars]] crime ring, Pandarus' death was meant as a public display for what happens to those who try to work on their own while a nortorious crime ring trafficks drugs and extorts shopowners in the city.
-Killed by [[Ysven]], an alleged member of the [[Jaguars]] crime ring, Pandarus' death was meant as a public display of what happened to those who tried to work on their own while a nortorious crime ring trafficked drugs and extorted shopowners in the city.
 [[Category:Historical Figures]]