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-'''Tengu''' are mysterious kitten-like creatures with sleek raven-like wings that inhabit the [[Northern Ithmia]]. Small enough to be picked up in mortal hands, blue eyes full of trust and innocence stare out from the black fur of these delicate, airborne felines.
+'''Tengu''' are mysterious kitten-like creatures with sleek raven-like wings that inhabit the [[Northern Ithmia]]. Small enough to be picked up by mortal hands, these delicate, airborne felines feature blue eyes full of trust and innocence that stare out at you from amidst their black fur.
-Perhaps the most popular is one called [[Tumira]].
+Perhaps the most popular of all tengu is the one named [[Tumira]].
 [[Category:Creatures of the Northern Ithmia]]