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By: Jerenii
By: Jerenii
Posted on: December 30, 2005
Posted on: December 30, 2005
There is, as any Siren worth her voice knows, a difference between the stories
There is, as any Siren worth her voice knows, a difference between the stories
that are told by men and those told by women. Often enough, a single tale
that are told by men and those told by women. Often enough, a single tale
transforms when passed from the lips of a Satyr to a Siren. Sometimes they
transforms when passed from the lips of a Satyr to a Siren. Sometimes they
seem like two stories instead of one.
seem like two stories instead of one.


It is said in Tasur'ke that the Garden of Whispers was born of the love of
It is said in Tasur'ke that the Garden of Whispers was born of the love of
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madness by the voices of the Gods and threw herself from a cliff to escape
madness by the voices of the Gods and threw herself from a cliff to escape
them.
them.


This is not that story. This is a version of the tale told amongst the Sirens,
This is not that story. This is a version of the tale told amongst the Sirens,
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generations since the true events were forgotten. This story is not about
generations since the true events were forgotten. This story is not about
Darius at all, but about Niliana, sweet Niliana, and her descent into insanity.
Darius at all, but about Niliana, sweet Niliana, and her descent into insanity.


It is said that Niliana was a Siren, of a particularly quiet disposition.
It is said that Niliana was a Siren, of a particularly quiet disposition.
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those days, was naturally hard of hearing, and this flaw made her shy of
those days, was naturally hard of hearing, and this flaw made her shy of
crowds.
crowds.


It came, then, that Darius stumbled across Niliana one chilly Aeguary evening
It came, then, that Darius stumbled across Niliana one chilly Aeguary evening
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of her voice, and he loved her as men love Sirens. Yet even then, when he
of her voice, and he loved her as men love Sirens. Yet even then, when he
approached her, she started like a young deer and hid within the house.
approached her, she started like a young deer and hid within the house.


Thus it came to be that Darius prayed to the great Sarapis and built his
Thus it came to be that Darius prayed to the great Sarapis and built his
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slumber, and fewer butterflies would come to keep her company. That winter was
slumber, and fewer butterflies would come to keep her company. That winter was
especially lonely for her, though she knew not the reason.
especially lonely for her, though she knew not the reason.


During the month of Mayan, Darius finished his gardens, and the town scheduled
During the month of Mayan, Darius finished his gardens, and the town scheduled
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quietly to the Gardens, though with so many voices, she always felt lost,
quietly to the Gardens, though with so many voices, she always felt lost,
unable to distinguish any single conversation.
unable to distinguish any single conversation.


And Darius saw her there and took her by the hand, and when he spoke, his voice
And Darius saw her there and took her by the hand, and when he spoke, his voice
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touched her flawed ears and allowed her to hear someone clearly for the first
touched her flawed ears and allowed her to hear someone clearly for the first
time.
time.


It seemed, then, to the townspeople that Niliana blossomed with the spring
It seemed, then, to the townspeople that Niliana blossomed with the spring
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quickly into a pure form of love, deep and genuine. They were married in less
quickly into a pure form of love, deep and genuine. They were married in less
than a year, and their marriage was truly happy.
than a year, and their marriage was truly happy.


Then came a time when Darius was called away to Shallam, to consult with others
Then came a time when Darius was called away to Shallam, to consult with others
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people of Tasur'ke also tell the story, she grew too proud of her husband's
people of Tasur'ke also tell the story, she grew too proud of her husband's
work, and her thoughts offended the Gods themselves.
work, and her thoughts offended the Gods themselves.


Niliana's ears were opened fully, and the normal, quiet sounds of the town were
Niliana's ears were opened fully, and the normal, quiet sounds of the town were
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own mother and sisters. Darius was sent for, and he raced home on a fast
own mother and sisters. Darius was sent for, and he raced home on a fast
horse.
horse.


Niliana cried with delight when she saw her husband, and they embraced, but
Niliana cried with delight when she saw her husband, and they embraced, but
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to no avail. The afflictions of the Gods were not to be cured by the medicines
to no avail. The afflictions of the Gods were not to be cured by the medicines
of mortals.
of mortals.


Time again passed, and it was another chill Aeguary eve when Darius, exhausted
Time again passed, and it was another chill Aeguary eve when Darius, exhausted
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voice could not. She ran to the Gardens where she had been so blessed and so
voice could not. She ran to the Gardens where she had been so blessed and so
cursed.
cursed.


Niliana moved through the garden like a ghost, her eyes haunted, and touched
Niliana moved through the garden like a ghost, her eyes haunted, and touched
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for compassion to be given her, for the joy that she had before her impious
for compassion to be given her, for the joy that she had before her impious
thoughts led her to madness.
thoughts led her to madness.


And then, only then in her deepest despair, Niliana was struck completely deaf.
And then, only then in her deepest despair, Niliana was struck completely deaf.
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cliff, her tattered mind barely able to grasp the sudden and somehow comforting
cliff, her tattered mind barely able to grasp the sudden and somehow comforting
silence.
silence.


Trying to put her hazy thoughts into coherent order, Niliana paused, swaying on
Trying to put her hazy thoughts into coherent order, Niliana paused, swaying on
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woman reached for the butterfly, stepped towards it…and found her peace below,
woman reached for the butterfly, stepped towards it…and found her peace below,
in the embrace of Caspian and the hereafter.
in the embrace of Caspian and the hereafter.


It is said amongst the townsfolk and the Sirens alike that Darius followed
It is said amongst the townsfolk and the Sirens alike that Darius followed
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that she and a man loved each other so purely that their lives depended on
that she and a man loved each other so purely that their lives depended on
being with the other, hearing the other, living or dying with the other.
being with the other, hearing the other, living or dying with the other.


And Sireni mothers whisper this tale to their daughters as a lesson in the
And Sireni mothers whisper this tale to their daughters as a lesson in the
purity of true love, the love that Sirens desire and often do not find, merely
purity of true love, the love that Sirens desire and often do not find, merely
because their very mien and voice cause men to love them.
because their very mien and voice cause men to love them.
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