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-Once a member of the [[occultist]] [[class]], '''Napoloen''' (born [[Chronos]] 18, 164 AF) has had many accomplishments in his life including serving as leader for both the [[The Occultists|Occultist]] [[Guild]] and the [[Magi]]-classed [[Warlocks of the Rising Phoenix|Warlocks]]' Guild, which he founded.
+Once a member of the [[occultist]] [[class]], '''Napoloen''' (born [[Chronos]] 18, 164 AF) has had many accomplishments in his life, including serving as leader for both the [[The Occultists|Occultist]] [[Guild]] and the [[Magi]]-classed [[Warlocks of the Rising Phoenix|Warlocks]] Guild, which he founded.
-As the Overseer of [[Ashtan]], he led the [[city]] through disputes with [[Shallam]] and during battles which led to the discovery of [[Dun Valley]]. He was responsible for an alliance with Shallam and [[Hashan]] which was critical in defeating the forces of the [[Tsol'teth]].
+As the Overseer of [[Ashtan]], he led the [[city]] through disputes with [[Shallam]] and during the battles which led to the discovery of [[Dun Valley]]. He was responsible for the alliance between Ashtan, Shallam and [[Hashan]], one which proved critical in defeating the forces of the [[Tsol'teth]].
 Napoloen also stood as the Grand Shadow of the [[Twilight|Order of Darkness]].
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