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-The '''Greater Dragons''' played a critical role in the [[War of Humanity]] by bearing the forces of the [[Aldar]] to rescue the Gods from destruction at [[Nishnatoba]]. A noble race and unlike their [[:category: Lesser Dragons|lesser dragon]] cousins, Greater Dragons are able to cleave time-space to reach their misty, mountainous home of the [[Parthren Gare]], created for them as their own plane of existence at the end of the [[Chaos Wars]]. Other normal mortals are unable to travel to this plane, as they are physically incapable of travelling through the fabric of reality by piercing the veil as Greater Dragons do.
+The '''Greater Dragons''' played a critical role in the [[War of Humanity]] by bearing the forces of the [[Aldar]] to rescue the [[Gods]] from destruction at [[Nishnatoba]]. Unlike their [[:category:Lesser Dragons|lesser dragon]] cousins, Greater Dragons are a noble race and able to cleave time-space to reach their misty, mountainous home of [[Parthren Gare]], created for them as their own plane of existence at the end of the [[Chaos Wars]]. Normal mortals are unable to travel to this plane, as they are physically incapable of piercing the veil of reality the way Greater Dragons do.
-The spirit of the red, black, silver, gold, blue, or green Greater Dragon is gifted to adventurers upon reaching the 99th circle of [[experience]] by [[Ashaxei]], the white dragon of the Aldar dragonmaster [[Han-Tolneth]]. Falling below the 99th level will cause the adventurer to lose the spirit - and all benefits attributed - until the 99th level is reached again.
-[[Aringar|Aringar Claros]] was the first mortal to attain dragonhood around the year 317 AF. There are currently around 101 dragons in Achaea.
+The spirit of a red, black, silver, gold, blue, or green Greater Dragon is gifted to [[adventurers]] upon reaching the 99th circle of [[experience]] by [[Ashaxei]], the white dragon of the Aldar Dragonmaster [[Han-Tolneth]]. Falling below the 99th level will cause the adventurer to lose the spirit - and all benefits attributed - until this milestone is aon again achieved.
+In 317 AF, [[Aringar|Aringar Claros]] became the first mortal to attain dragonhood; now, over 100 adventurers have succeeded in achieving this lofty goal.
 http://achaea.com/Images/painted_dragon.jpg
 [[Category:Dragons]][[Category:Adventurer races]]