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As the original author, I understand that any comment I make on my own writing may distemper some aspect of bias. However, I feel that changing the tone would lose the relative atmosphere that is garnered from such a place as the Erisian Pyramid, and detract from the fact that it truly is a random place. I disagree that it is an advertisement, but there is a distinct emphasis on the aspect of Chaos and relation to Eris, as well as a distinct rundown of locations within and peoples inside. I do agree that my writing style is certainly unique, however, this is one of the earliest articles in the Wiki, and although it may seem that I was spurious in choosing the manner in which I depicted it, I assure you that I studied the other articles at the time in detail to find a platform to work from. I believe the article's content is indeed objective and informative, but not in the same standard fashion of writing as perhaps other articles. However, this article is for free-editing, and I am willing to change what I have written to suit a stated, specified norm, but really, I'd prefer if some semblance of the tone was still tangible in some manner. | As the original author, I understand that any comment I make on my own writing may distemper some aspect of bias. However, I feel that changing the tone would lose the relative atmosphere that is garnered from such a place as the Erisian Pyramid, and detract from the fact that it truly is a random place. I disagree that it is an advertisement, but there is a distinct emphasis on the aspect of Chaos and relation to Eris, as well as a distinct rundown of locations within and peoples inside. I do agree that my writing style is certainly unique, however, this is one of the earliest articles in the Wiki, and although it may seem that I was spurious in choosing the manner in which I depicted it, I assure you that I studied the other articles at the time in detail to find a platform to work from. I believe the article's content is indeed objective and informative, but not in the same standard fashion of writing as perhaps other articles. However, this article is for free-editing, and I am willing to change what I have written to suit a stated, specified norm, but really, I'd prefer if some semblance of the tone was still tangible in some manner. | ||
I apologise for the fact that my writing sounds like something from a cheesy holiday brochure. Having never written for one perhaps I should focus my attentions on getting a job there, rather than using this new-found talent to enter the Bardic or such forums. Oh well. | I apologise for the fact that my writing sounds like something from a cheesy holiday brochure. Having never written for one perhaps I should focus my attentions on getting a job there, rather than using this new-found talent to enter the Bardic or such forums. Oh well. [[User:Xaviere|Xaviere]] 15.27:, 18 December 2006 (GMT) | ||
Okay, that last comment was a bit ratty, I apologise for that... share a biscuit? [[User:Xaviere|Xaviere]] 16.50:, 18 December 2006 (GMT) | |||
== Seed of Chaos == | |||
The entire room that the Seed of Chaos used to be in is no longer attached to the Golden Dais of Creation. | |||
There was also a room with a denizen in it that gave visual tours (I can't remember her name), the room had no exits. Within the Golden Apple Corps or something. That's probably gone now too. --[[User:Kunama|Kunama]] 13:43, 21 April 2008 (GMT) | |||
:Yes, the [[Corps of the Golden Apple]] article is in the "edit needed" category now (and the link to that article from the [[Golden Dais of Creation]] was removed) for that reason. And do you mean [[Hagbard Celine]]? I've never met him, though I've looked. He was reached from the Corps? --[[User:Krypton|Krypton]] 14:47, 21 April 2008 (GMT) | |||
--[[User:Imyrr|Imyrr]] 05:26, 19 January 2009 (UTC) Updated! Should be good. | |||